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kermodii's avatar

Very Didion-Babitz esque. Definitely one of the more candid pieces here and something I prefer tenfold. The imagery of golf carts and all-around Saturnalia especially reminded me of more deep South Americana, specifically Peachtree City and Celebration. Great writing! Enjoy the Midwest. Borg solidarity for all ✊✊

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Jasmine McBride's avatar

Your comment has single-handedly made my month. "Didion-Babitz esque"... I don't know of any higher praise, thank you so so much!!!

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Jane's avatar

Jasmine, I just love love this piece. Your writing makes you feel you can see/feel like you are there. So impressive!! Can’t wait for the next one!!!💕

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Jasmine McBride's avatar

Thank you so much 🩷🩷 so happy you enjoyed it!

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Maxwell Beem's avatar

“Getting a girlfriend is good” indeed

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Shelly Gould's avatar

That was wonderful. So Nnce to read something interesting and well written and understandable all at the same time. Good for you!

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Jasmine McBride's avatar

Thank you!

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Olly Lovatt's avatar

There's something bizarrely beautiful about a scrolled on Borg.

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Hannah Wilson's avatar

Magical piece, I LOVE this

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